sunfright: A page from Renée Vivien's 1904 edition of "Une femme m'apparut" with edits in ink. (eternal edits)
S. ([personal profile] sunfright) wrote2023-09-19 03:03 pm
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tuesday.






I'm two scenes (out of six) into chapter five and I'm already feeling the foreboding writer's drop, not in energy levels or motivation, but in mood. Man, I'm one cranky writer today. I love this story and I don't want it to be over, yet I really, really want to finish it. What a conundrum.

I realized, just two seconds ago, that my Giovanina voice is totally based on inspired by Marzia from the book version of Call Me By Your Name. Same down to earth, kinda simple, but emotionally very sensitive and mature voice. So, now that I've figured that out, what's the first thing I do? Considering what exciting AU's and canon mergings could happen from that, of course. Marzia/Giovanina should be a thing. Or maybe Teresina/Marzia... Hmm. We'll see if I'm not barfing Napoli once this story is done and won't wanna touch it again for a while, or if I take the other extreme. Cling to it like a koala baby to its mother.

I did take a quote from CMBYN and used in this scene, though. I must remember to credit, when we get to posting time. It's one sentence, not much at all, but very essential to the whole core of the scene, so yes. Definitely crediting. /makes note to self



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